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March 27, 2005
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:iconcinderscar:
Thank you all for one year of continued support for my webcomic :heart: I really appreciate it! As a token of my gratitude...look at this picture :D

The main problem with this picture is that the inking was really stylistic and with such realistic shading, it doesn't seem to fit together very well. I'm not completely satisfied yet, but this is the third coloring of the picture, so I'm going to leave it here for now =) My quibbles are Seiraa (greenish hair)'s face and Columbine (in the tree)'s hair. Columbine's hair is salmon pink at the top, and it fades to yellow, then to white. It got weird when I was shading it and looks... bad. Seiraa's face is just sorta' wonky and bothers me ^^;

Copic Version | Lineart Version | Halfcolored Version

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I have some wonderful people who have offered to color the lineart; if you are one of those people and you finish, please send me a note with a link to make sure that I see it! I will put a link to you right here, as well! Thanks!! ^___^ If anyone else wants to color the lineart (you can color it like however you want, you don't have to follow my colors or anything ;) ), then either use the lineart version linked to above, or note/e-mail me requesting a larger version =)

~Aristic-Defiance's Colored Version :heart:

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Any critiques/comments would be greatly appreciated, as I would like to perfect this piece as best I can! Thank you!
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:iconirishbass:
I love your artwork,nuff said(:headbang:)
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:iconassimilated:
~assimilated Jun 7, 2005  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautifully done. Such amazing detail.
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:iconcinderscar:
Thank you! Thanks also for the :+fav: ^_^
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:iconjqka:
~jqka Apr 25, 2005   Interface Designer
really cool
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:iconscribbled-angelfish:
so metallic, so shiny, so dark, so beautiful.
so i have failed at advanced critique....

sorry :)
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:iconcinderscar:
That's fine ^_^ I'm glad you like it!
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:iconclocks:
colours are so awsome man AWSOME !!!!!!
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:iconrushifa:
I really like how this version turned out. The inking may be a bit off for the coloring style, but I don't think it messes up the overall affect. I like how it looks like a really odd form of watercoloring; the colors look wet and almost like they're moving as you look at them. The branches at the top look a bit cut-out from the background, and the tree could use more shading, or something, in my opinion, but I don't think either thing is big enough to worry about or change. The flowers, although a but flat looking in the centers, are gorgeous.
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:iconcinderscar:
Thanks alot!
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`Sugargrl14 Mar 28, 2005  Student Digital Artist
Wow, that is good!

I'm still coloring it. ^^; So much to color...
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